Major Writing Assignment #1: Peer Comments
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Major Speech Assignment #1: Outline
“Role Models” Commercial Purpose: Persuade the audience to vote for Hillary Clinton in the 2016 presidential election. Thesis: Donald Trump’s behavior will set a negative example for America’s youth. Purpose: Show that Donald Trump is a poor role model Purpose: Show that Hillary is a good role model Purpose: Make it about the children. Sympathize with the children. Imagery Kids watching Trump Trump being inflammatory, making fun of disability Kids anxious faces “Our children are watching. What example will we set for them?” Setting Mood; dark, gloomy TV light shining on kids faces Brighter, Lighter, Happier when Hillary is shown Music Tense, sad when showing Trump Becomes upbeat for Hillary A person watching this commercial might not know what Trump has said, seeing this commercial might sway a pro-trumper Everyone has kids, liberal or conservative. Would you want someone saying these things to your child? Negatively representing an oppo...
I really enjoyed reading your paper. Although I am not highly interested in counseling, I found your paper of interest. I liked the way your paper flowed. All the information was well integrated into the essay.
ReplyDeleteI think I saw one grammatical error in the first paragraph of your conclusion. I believe you meant to say "doubtful" rather than "doubly".
You did a very good job presenting the different genres of writing done in a counseling field.