Autumn Tallman's Rhetoric Blog

There are a few differences between research-based argumentative papers and papers using the IMRaD format. The greatest difference is that IMRaD relies on primary research, whereas other argumentative papers rely on secondary research. In addition, IMRaD is more scientific. Papers with this format spend a great amount of time explaining the primary research, i.e. how it was conducted, statistics, and results. In contrast, other argumentative essays spend more time analyzing outcomes of multiple studies, rather than focusing on the details of each specific study.

Creative Writing (A) + Clearly written, professional, well incorporated quotes and citations - Too many quotes, not enough reflection Engineering (A-) + Very thorough, interesting writing - A bit confusing, used terms and formulas most readers would not understand Political Science (B) + Appealing formatting, proper in-text citations - Repetitive, empty Economics (B) + Utilized sources well, quotes explained thoroughly  - Informal, unprofessional Business (B-) + Well written, understandable - Sources not cited often enough, formatting could improve Psychology (C-) + Interviewed 2 people - Not well written, too much dialogue, repetitive, too short

I am happy with how I did on the first speech. I knew my information and I was not very nervous. I do think that I could have put a bit more effort into my visual aids, and I know that I do not always seem very natural when I give speeches. But that is a difficult thing to master, and overall I feel that I did pretty well. For the next speech I should move around more, use more variation of tone, and improve my visuals. In order to achieve these goals I will put more effort into practicing my speech multiple times beforehand in front of my roommates or other peers, and ask for constructive criticism.

“Role Models” Commercial Purpose: Persuade the audience to vote for Hillary Clinton in the 2016 presidential election. Thesis: Donald Trump’s behavior will set a negative example for America’s youth. Purpose: Show that Donald Trump is a poor role model Purpose: Show that Hillary is a good role model Purpose: Make it about the children. Sympathize with the children. Imagery Kids watching Trump Trump being inflammatory, making fun of disability Kids anxious faces “Our children are watching. What example will we set for them?” Setting Mood; dark, gloomy TV light shining on kids faces Brighter, Lighter, Happier when Hillary is shown Music Tense, sad when showing Trump Becomes upbeat for Hillary A person watching this commercial might not know what Trump has said, seeing this commercial might sway a pro-trumper Everyone has kids, liberal or conservative. Would you want someone saying these things to your child? Negatively representing an oppo...

Hillary Clinton: "Role Models" https://youtu.be/mrX3Ql31URA Clinton's ad uses pathos, influencing the emotions of the audience by using children. Children represent innocence and the future, and adults want to protect children. The commercial utilizes changes in imagery to evoke certain responses in the audience. For example, the lighting is dark when showing Trump and light when showing Hillary. The children's faces are upset and anxious when Trump is on the television screen, but neutral or more excited and hopeful when Hillary appears. The commercial adds to this effect through the music and chosen speech excerpts. The music is quiet and in a minor key during Trump's clip, and becomes louder and more positive and upbeat for Hillary. In addition, the clips of Trump that were chosen were deliberately chosen to show him in a negative light; makers of the ad purposely chose to use footage of the worst things he has said or done, and opted to use more positive ...

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